How do you write a character that you just cannot understand, or even answer basic questions about? That’s the problem I’ve been having with Mary, for quite a while now. I haven’t been able to use her effectively, because I don’t know anything about her, even after working on her for a few years.
All of my other characters, even more recent ones that I haven’t drawn yet, that only exist as notes on an index card, are easier to write. One thing they all have that Mary doesn’t - real personality traits. Each of them represents at least one obscure part of my personality - Daisy is my determination to overcome any challenge. Bill is my irresponsibility. Mercy is a combination of my apathy, and barely-subdued anger.
With Mary, I can’t think of one thing that she’s supposed to represent. There’s no basis in reality, no emotional connection, nothing that really lets me get inside her head and know exactly how she thinks. She’s a prop. What’s her favorite color? Favorite food? Life goal? Worst fear? Hell if I know, but I’m working on finding out, by starting from scratch. I’m throwing out her current backstory, and writing a new one that will hopefully not only make a lot more sense, but also make it easier to place her in comics or a short film.
Fortunately, there’s a silver lining to how poorly she was written up to this point - she fit in with the other characters so badly, that rewriting her doesn’t affect them much, if at all.
Of course, there is also a way that I could keep her as-is, where she would not only make some sense, but would also allow for some twisted humor - what if she was actually Daisy’s imaginary friend? It could make sense in that she has the type of body that Daisy wishes she had, and is also completely care-free, with none of Daisy’s responsibilities or troubles.
There would still be a couple problems, though - if Mary is imaginary, then she can’t be in any stand-alone stories, and other characters can’t interact with her. Another thing is the fact that Daisy is weird and interesting enough already, without schizophrenia being added to the mix. And then there’s the fact that this type of thing has been done before - Calvin & Hobbes, Fight Club, Ferris Bueller’s Day Off (according to some people), among others…